Emailing Venues

I have sent out some emails to all the venues I have researched and as of have had no response. I have sent this email to both Yellow Bean Studios and Target Studios and after researching more locations will do the same for them.

Dear ________,

We are two year 13 media students and for our coursework this year we need to shoot a performance and narrative music video, ideally in a white room or against a white background. After researching spaces in our local area we have decided that your space is one of the ideal locations we would love to use. I know you probably come across several emails like this on a regular basis but we were wondering whether it would be at all possible for us to film in your location in late October. If this is not possible do you know any other locations that would be suitable? Thank you for your time in advance and we look forward to hearing from you. 

Kind Regards,

Millie Leader and Molly Simpson

Lutterworth College