Sunday, 30 November 2014

Improvements made to Advert

Draft Advert



For my advert I received positive feedback. I was given a 7/10 and was given very little changes to be made. As seen when you look at the comparisons between the draft and the final advert there is very little difference. 


Final Advert



The comments I was given were all positive and the only thing I needed to change was the amount of legal information I had used. I feel that my advert looks very professional with this change and the minimalism adds to the uniqueness of my ideas and fits in perfectly with my chosen genre. 


Changes made on advert

- Reduced legal information from 8 lines to 2 lines.

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